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Hey, chin up man, it looks pretty good! I'd have to say that the only thing that seems slightly off-putting about it is the kid's expression- he seems shocked/frightened, I sort of assume you were aiming more towards amazement, or something?
-- Yes, I am an idiot why is everyone doing Iron Giant?? I want to make one too!
I love how you did the robot. Iron Giant is one of my favourite cartoon and I love it more and more now -- =MatsuoAmon Get rid of the noise in everything but the lights from the eyes (which would show a dust like effect) Personally i llike the camera angle and expression, but the noise is overused.
-- Thayer [link] ....then you need some rim lighting on the hand (which means also making the most front part of the hand darker) And if you are going to have that much light bending around his face, then split the face essentially in half and put the right side in shadow. Hope that helps.
-- Thayer [link] just try the noise in the lighted area (and feather the edges of the noise where the light fades out...but yea, i think it looks better
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